Aster (1/3)

Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

Seems like more homework of a cryptic nature for a bear of little brain like me!

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Neville, it's written by a pea brain!!
I am trying to write long or connected drabbles. But after the last series, I may not keep readers engaged till the end. How did I fare in this?
Would love to know if there is any room for improvement?

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Thanks for reading and voting, Neville!

Christopher about 2 years ago

I haven't read the other two but at first read my impression was heading off to put flowers on someone's grave. It will be interesting to see if I've gotten the wrong end of the stick.

VerityAlways about 2 years ago

Thanks, Christopher! I hate that my writing is so obvious. I meant it to unveil only at the third drabble. More homework now!

Christopher about 2 years ago

It's not obvious at all. That was just a vague impression upon first reading. And we at Drablr are known for misdirection, so you can't always take first impressions at face value anyway.

Neville Hunt about 2 years ago

Agreed!

VerityAlways about 2 years ago

Thank you both. I'll take your word, but no more training wheels, okay? I would love honest opinions, please!!

Christopher about 2 years ago

I always give honest opinions, even when Neville and I are trying to outdo each other with puns!

VerityAlways about 2 years ago

Thank you, Christopher! I really look up to the feedback.