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2 minutes. That was my last flash of happiness.
They discussed in hushed voices. Maybe, they will take turns. Then, they stacked me upright and tight.
The horror began.
They had some archaic rituals. That always came in trois.
My toes were the first target.
They plucked it, barring the big and pinkie for balance.
The pain and process escalated.
It spelt gore.
They inched upwards. My heart, pounding.
Their claws plunged in the thigh, then fingers.
I felt I was at an altitude. Breathing became difficult.
Vision blurred. Knees jerked, I buckled.
They screeched, 'No! Jenga is falling down!'

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    Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

    Hehe! You had me taken in right until the last 4 words, Verity! Great stuff!

    (trois ou trios? Both make sense.)

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    Mike Arnzen over 2 years ago

    JENGA! hahaha.... brilliant

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    VerityAlways over 2 years ago

    Thanks, Neville.
    Can I make an excuse that auto correct assumed it was french?

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    VerityAlways over 2 years ago

    Thanks, Mike!

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    Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

    Of course you can, Verity, of course!

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    Christopher over 2 years ago

    Nice, Verity! I love Jenga even though I don't play much anymore. Had me guessing right until the end too.

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    VerityAlways over 2 years ago

    Thanks, Christopher!

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