An array of photo frames, were lined along the foyer. Family and individual portraits, all smiling, contented, filled with fun and frolic.
I could imagine every picture having an innate story. My eyes turned moist at the reflection of love, warmth and hope.
I was trapped in the trail, until I reached the last frame. It was intimidating.
A woman, her teal eyes were captivating.
I tried to decipher, every furrow buried deep, a mystery it holds and agony untold.
Do I know her? She does look dear, why cannot I remember?
I turned away from the mirror in vexation.
Christopher 11 months ago
Wow. This is very powerful.
(Should the word be "contented" in the first paragraph?)
VerityAlways 11 months ago
Thanks Christopher, it is very moving.
I'm going to drink more coffee now, will save me from being arrested by grammar police!
VerityAlways 11 months ago
Changed them, thank you Christopher!
Neville Hunt 11 months ago
Terrific! Powerful indeed, as Christopher has said. I love stories that involve mirrors and mirror image twins in particular. One of my darker short stories involves such a pair. Maybe I’ll see if I can convert it into a drabble series (if I can find it!).
Christopher 11 months ago
You're welcome, Verity. I try to proofread everything before I post it but sometimes I miss things. Luckily Neville catches them and points out the ones I miss.
Neville Hunt 11 months ago
Gulp! (Sorry if I offend!)
Christopher 10 months ago
No, I appreciate it, as I hope Verity does when I do it to them!
VerityAlways 10 months ago
Thank you Neville, looking forward for those dark ones!
VerityAlways 10 months ago
I really appreciate it and am very grateful, Christopher.
I do hope an extra ounce of coffee and proofread should help! ill keep my eyes open next time!