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What a line up. With Trzenkiewski in goal, Svodbogdanovich and Grzdanskivatna the two Centre-backs, Dzavnakagrad at Left-back and his club colleague Vojnabolokov opposite at Right-back completing the back four; then there's the two exciting Centre midfielders; Zvodlokov and Zdangalga flanked by Vberklovka Dagbalga on the left and Sladijna Dagbalga on the right; the first brothers to play for their country, and this powerful and dynamic side, completed by Dzolgadnakla and Dzeraskvabagna up front, it's no surprise to anyone that Dick Johnson, the English commentator is nowhere to be found now the whistle's blown to start the match.

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    Absolutely love it. Love the title! Love the way you have Slav-ishly persisted in detailing the line-up! This is a really great drabble that is so amusing. Thanks, Shaun. What a terrific clutch of drabbles so far! I can tell that you love the medium.

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    shaun almost 8 years ago

    Wow! Thanks to you for taking time out to read and respond too. I love the drabble so much but I should be concentrating on my novel...NOT HAPPENING

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    I have at least a book's worth of short stories already written, but every time I try to assemble them for publishing, I tinker around with them. I also have a book's worth of drabbles now, but they should be easier because any tinkering can only be very minimal. (Still need to get my arse in gear though!)

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    shaun almost 8 years ago

    Thanks you guys. I enjoyed putting that one together immensely.

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