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The walls were closing in. You claw at them as you fall down into the void and the light becomes extinct.

Suddenly you come roaring up into a red glow gasping for air as around you demonic creatures frolic. You scream as one approaches, instinctively swinging the sword you now seem to be holding.

It strikes the demon who shatters into a thousand pieces that begin to float upwards morphing into a million mouths laughing at you.

You sit up suddenly surrounded by various bloodied needles and a dozen or so unconscious comrades.

You breakdown crying. What have you done!

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    Neville Hunt about 6 years ago

    A brilliant first drabble, Peter. It must have taken you ages to write! A warm welcome to us all at Drablr. :-)

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    Neville Hunt about 6 years ago

    I think Dr Abbler would like this.

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    Neville Hunt about 6 years ago

    and Jeff Taylor.

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    S J Gunn about 6 years ago

    Well done Peter. I really enjoyed your first drabble. :-)

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