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She watches the bed where the old woman lies. Gaunt. Haglike. Trapped just this side of death. The nurse tries to feel compassion, and instead feels disgust.
Might as well be dead already.
Then the cracked, leathery mouth moves, barely. Just a muscle spasm, a twitch. Surely?
But there it is again, faint movement, a formless, breathless word.
Trembling, she places her ear to the cold lips.
“…you’re… mine…”
A gnarled hand closes over her wrist.
The nurse wakes. A familiar face stands over her.
Her face.
She cannot move.
The body that used to be hers smiles. Walks away.

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    Bryan Thomas over 9 years ago

    Creepy! Very good!

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    Jonathan Mills over 9 years ago

    Thanks a lot.

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    Horrorshow over 9 years ago

    I took a lot away with me from this. Very good indeed.

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    Jonathan Mills over 9 years ago

    Thanks - I got the idea watching Dr Who on Saturday, the bit where he's translating while asleep. If I could have fit in the not-nurse turning off the life support before walking away, I would have.

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