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The day had finally arrived. Jasmine was about to execute a mission she’d planned ever since she was a little girl, when her parents had told her the truth.

She was standing in front of the house, and with a heavy heart, rang the doorbell. Within seconds, it opened.

There, standing in front of her, was a middle aged woman, dressed in an old jogging suit, looking rough and intimidating. Jasmine had half a mind to turn around and walk away, but didn't.

“Hello," she said. "I’m Jasmine. Almost twenty-four years ago, you gave birth to a baby girl…”

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    Fiction Fare over 4 years ago

    You give the best compliments, Avery. Thank you, :-)

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    D.M. over 4 years ago

    Given the situation, it is so easy to fantasize. Your description of the woman at
    the door is perfect!

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    Fiction Fare over 4 years ago

    DM, do you mean perfect for this particular storyline, or perfect as a woman?

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