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‘I’ll show you!’ I thought. ‘Well, THIS will get their attention.’ I looked at my accomplice. “Ready?”
My father and his friend entered the cellar. “Alice, no!” screamed my father. I plunged the dagger into the boy. Blood poured from his abdomen. He fell to the floor.
“My Lord!” yelled the friend as he picked up the knife. “That was wonderful!”
“Was it?” I asked the stage director, with hope.
“Why yes. This fake blood is fantastic! See me tomorrow after school.” My father looked at me.
“OK. You have proved your point. Now go clean up your little brother.”

6 comments add one below

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    Neville Hunt over 7 years ago

    Great stuff S.J. Bloody good in fact! A warm welcome to Drablr :-)

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    Peter Humfrey over 7 years ago

    Gripping and a twist all in 100 words. Fantasic work SJ and look forward to many more drabls! :)

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    S J Gunn over 7 years ago

    Thank you Neville and Peter! :-)

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    S J Gunn over 7 years ago

    Thank yo Drew :-)

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    Rachel Ball over 7 years ago

    What a fun little scene :) I love misdirection.

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    S J Gunn over 7 years ago

    Thank you Rachel1 :-)

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