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The Littlest Client #150

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The vase started wobbling back and forth as O'Sullivan put his hands up.

"Please, sir! Stop!"

I slowed down just enough so it wouldn't actually tip off the side.

"Now, I want you to use that telephone over there and tell Gallagher that Jake Randolph wants to see him about Max Dolan. You got that?"

He still had his hands up, " But, sir...!"

I tipped the pedestal over and the vase went toppling but I caught it inches before it smashed onto the floor.

"Might not be so lucky next time. My reflexes aren't what they used to be."

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    Neville Hunt over 3 years ago

    Nice one, Jake! You should join a cricket team!

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    Christopher over 3 years ago

    I loved this scene when I wrote it. I could just picture Jake juggling around antiques trying to intimidate someone.

    This was one I had to revise, though, because I originally had Max go in with him and I realized that was a tactical mistake, so I rewrote some of it and had Max wait in the car.

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