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Tiki Moon #327

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I didn't have time for the touching reunion. I had to find Scarlett. I picked Nick's gun up off the ground and handed it to Deborah.

"Do you know how to use this?" I asked.

She nodded.

"I thought you were going to wait for Detective Harrigan," I said.

"I left a note with the bartender that has the directions on it. He'll give it to Harrigan."

I knew the walkie-talkie that Nick had couldn't have much of a range so Scarlett had to be close.

"Deborah, does your company have any other properties around here?"

"Yes," she said...

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    Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago

    Smart thinking Jake... and very well done Deborah. You've certainly got guts lady....and maybe you should have Morty and Nick's guts for garters too!

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    Christopher almost 5 years ago

    Ha. Yeah, the other ending had her in her office with Jake wrapping her part of the story up and I must say I like this one a lot better. She deserved a more heroic ending.

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    Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago

    Absolutely, she’s a star attraction... and an attractive star!

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