"Now look," I said, "I don't have time to stand here arguing with you. Scarlett's life is on the line. When Detective Harrigan gets here in a few minutes you direct him to construction site number 7 in Pacific Palisades. I just hope Scarlett and I aren't both dead by the time he gets there."
I turned and started to the door and Deborah yelled out, "Be careful, Jake!"
I looked back and smiled weakly. It was all I could manage under the circumstances.
I jumped in my car and tore out for Pacific Palisades, hoping I wasn't too late...
Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago
They got the drop on you Jake. Take great care please.
Christopher almost 5 years ago
This ending wasn't supposed to happen. In the original one Morty and Nick were at the Tiki Moon and Scarlett never got kidnapped.
Christopher almost 5 years ago
But I think this one turned out much better than the other ending would have.
Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago
Well yippee for us readers then Christopher. This story's on special promotion... we got a bonus!