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Tiki Moon #316

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"Now look," I said, "I don't have time to stand here arguing with you. Scarlett's life is on the line. When Detective Harrigan gets here in a few minutes you direct him to construction site number 7 in Pacific Palisades. I just hope Scarlett and I aren't both dead by the time he gets there."

I turned and started to the door and Deborah yelled out, "Be careful, Jake!"

I looked back and smiled weakly. It was all I could manage under the circumstances.

I jumped in my car and tore out for Pacific Palisades, hoping I wasn't too late...

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    Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago

    They got the drop on you Jake. Take great care please.

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    Christopher almost 5 years ago

    This ending wasn't supposed to happen. In the original one Morty and Nick were at the Tiki Moon and Scarlett never got kidnapped.

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    Christopher almost 5 years ago

    But I think this one turned out much better than the other ending would have.

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    Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago

    Well yippee for us readers then Christopher. This story's on special promotion... we got a bonus!

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