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Tiki Moon #262

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It would have been funny if it weren't so serious, me sneaking up behind Mr. Saint who was sneaking up behind Scarlett. Just before he got to her I took the butt end of my revolver and brought it down hard on the back of his neck. He fell forward on his face, out cold.

Scarlett exhaled loudly as I got the flashlight and rolled Mr. Saint over. I shined the light in his face. Only it wasn't Mr. Saint.

Scarlett said, "Well, is that him?"

I shook my head, "I've never seen this guy before. He's not Mr. Saint."

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    Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago

    Well what a turn up for the books. Maybe Saint’s behind you Jake...đŸ‘¼

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    Christopher almost 5 years ago

    This was one of those things that happened as I was writing it. I planned to have a fight in the office but the narrative had a mind of its own and took control.

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    Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago

    Let it have free rein, Christopher; it probably knows best!

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