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Tiki Moon #176

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I'm generally not jarred by much, but the sight of Nick Berman bouncing up and down on Morty's crotch was enough to send me into shock overload.

So, Morty and Nick were a couple of queers. At least it explained a little better why they both wanted Deborah dead.

I pushed the door the rest of the way open and they both stopped their unnatural act as Morty screamed, "How did you get in here?!"

"Probably easier than you got in there," I said as I pointed to Nick, who looked positively ill.

"This...this...is...not what it looks like," Morty stammered...

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    Christopher about 1 year ago

    Again, sorry for the non-politically correct language. But that's what someone like Jake would've described guys like that back then. And since most of the people reading this are in the UK, I know the word fag means something different over there and decided not to use it.

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    Neville Hunt about 1 year ago

    I don’t know about fag... but this is smoking Christopher!

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    Christopher about 1 year ago

    Haha. Thanks, Neville. Do they still call cigarettes that over there? I'm afraid most of my knowledge of British slang comes from shows that are 30 to 40 years old.

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    Neville Hunt about 1 year ago

    Going for a fag still has the same meaning over here, but fewer and fewer are doing so... which must be good for the nation’s health.

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    Drew Martyn about 1 year ago

    I'm pretty sure no one is going to complain about non-pc language. It shows Jake as a product of his time (and shows you've thought about his character and attitudes as well as his actions). It's a brilliant twist of the narrative, too.

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    Christopher about 1 year ago

    Much thanks, Drew.

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