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Tiki Moon #168

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It was locked, naturally. Aside from my gun I had brought two other party favors with me: a flashlight and a lockpick. I pulled them both from my back pockets. I turned on the flashlight, directed the light toward the keyhole and began picking the lock. It took a few tries but I finally got it unlocked.

I eased open the door, which squeaked slightly but to me sounded like a buzzsaw in the otherwise quiet Beverly Hills night. I shined the flashlight around the room. It was unremarkable, just a place for storing groceries.

I opened the pantry door...

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    Neville Hunt almost 5 years ago

    Oh you tease, Christopher! The dot dot dots make us think something dramatic’s about to happen!

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    Christopher almost 5 years ago

    Haha. I've actually done that from the very first Jake story at the end of every drabble. I'm not sure why but it's a habit now.

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