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The Naked Beat

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We transferred from the delivery van into my Pontiac Bonneville quickly. I cranked up and peeled out of the alley like a greased lightning bolt stuck in the backside of a cheetah being pursued by a swarm of angry bees. A car rounded the corner of Pico and Alvarado practically on two wheels. I got a glimpse of the inside of the car, which looked like Charlie Chan's family reunion.

I headed toward State Street, where the General Hospital was located. I wanted to get Blaze checked in, but had to lose the flying moo goo gai pan brothers first...

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    Wow, what a multiple simile, Jake; I'm exhausted!

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    Good wok, Christopher. :-)

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