Kerri gazed out across the water like someone who'd been blind all their life suddenly being given new eyes. I wondered if it was the amnesia or if she'd never actually seen the ocean before. She turned, looking up at me and smiling. I suddenly had that respiratory trouble again.
I turned, putting my arm around her waist. I pulled her body against mine and touched my lips to hers. Our tongues began swirling around each other. I could feel her breasts pressing softly against my chest.
The sun slipped below the horizon, leaving only a souvenir in our minds...
D.M. over 8 years ago
Turning from them to the slipping sun is a great cinematic touch.
Christopher over 8 years ago
Thank you. I could really feel that moment as I wrote it.
Neville Hunt over 8 years ago
This is greeeeeat stuff Christopher. Just up my strasse as they don't say in Germany
Christopher over 8 years ago
Danke, Herr Hunt! (When I read "strasse" it made me think of _Hogan's Heroes_!)
Christopher over 8 years ago
I tried to italicize Hogan's Heroes but apparently that underscore trick only works in a drabble.