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Murder Is But A Memory

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Kerri gazed out across the water like someone who'd been blind all their life suddenly being given new eyes. I wondered if it was the amnesia or if she'd never actually seen the ocean before. She turned, looking up at me and smiling. I suddenly had that respiratory trouble again.

I turned, putting my arm around her waist. I pulled her body against mine and touched my lips to hers. Our tongues began swirling around each other. I could feel her breasts pressing softly against my chest.

The sun slipped below the horizon, leaving only a souvenir in our minds...

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    D.M. over 8 years ago

    Turning from them to the slipping sun is a great cinematic touch.

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    Christopher over 8 years ago

    Thank you. I could really feel that moment as I wrote it.

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    Neville Hunt over 8 years ago

    This is greeeeeat stuff Christopher. Just up my strasse as they don't say in Germany

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    Christopher over 8 years ago

    Danke, Herr Hunt! (When I read "strasse" it made me think of _Hogan's Heroes_!)

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    Christopher over 8 years ago

    I tried to italicize Hogan's Heroes but apparently that underscore trick only works in a drabble.

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