Jake Randolph, Private Investigator Pt. 23
We stared at the horizon for a while, our hands resting on the railing. I slid my hand east a bit and she slid hers west, and before long the twain had met. It was like grabbing a live wire. I heard bells ringing in the distance, which was either coming from the arcade or they were God's way of telling me I just hit the jackpot.
I had to take things slowly. Kerri was in a very vulnerable state and I couldn't take advantage of her. Actually, that was not true. I could've taken advantage but chose not to...
- Category: Crime, Murder & Mystery
6 comments add one below
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D.M. over 5 years ago
Things are getting hot!
(Not sure about the use of the present tense in the last statement.) -
Christopher over 5 years ago
I see chivalry doesn't trump a grammar error. I corrected it.
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Neville Hunt over 5 years ago
I like the chivalry; grammar lacks feelings.
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Christopher over 5 years ago
Thanks, Neville. Me too.
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D.M. over 5 years ago
(It's that piece of spinach left in your front tooth, that you hope a friend would advise you about. Please say you would do it for me.)
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Christopher over 5 years ago
Of course, D.M. I just didn't catch that I had used the first person in that last line. I was concentrating on the chivalry. So, thanks for the tip. I fixed it.
