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Fairytales #9

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Her face composed again to relief at the next bedroom. Nigel's domain, she thought, as she sat with a sigh on the bed.

"The master bedroom!" Said Joe swinging open a door.

Her expression crumpled. No storage space, simply a huge bed dominating the room. And at its head sat three large deliciously plumped pillows. She faltered, clutched her clipboard tight and struggled to find words.

"I think I've seen all I need."

She left immediately without even seeing the basement playroom. Promised to be in touch by the end of the day but they never heard from her again.

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    Tim Jones about 3 years ago

    Fantastic as ever, Lisa. Makes much more sense with all 5 parts, although reading part 3 after the others gives it a Tarantino vibe!

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    Lisa Williams about 3 years ago

    Thanks for reading (Twice) and pointing out missing bit X

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    Tim Jones about 3 years ago

    No problem at all!

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    Drew Martyn about 3 years ago

    A brilliant take on the tale, well worth waiting for, Lisa. I'm not sure what will happen to my weekends when the Friday Fairy Tales stop...

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    Lisa Williams about 3 years ago

    Thanks Drew. No sign of them stopping yet although just single drabbles planned in November X

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