scribbler avatar

by

Wow! I've just seen the most wonderful creature at the top of this hill (I'm at the bottom).
Okay, she's no oil painting, but there's just something about her. I've got to meet her.
I mosey on up the hill.
Ten years later and I'm still only halfway up.
I can see her much clearer now.
She's withered on the vine a bit.
I think I'll head back down the hill.
Another ten years and I'm at the bottom of the hill again.
I've just wasted twenty years on a female! I never learn.
I hate being a bastard tortoise!

8 comments add one below

  • avatar

    Brandon Sutton over 3 years ago

    I liked the funny turn at the end!

  • avatar

    K.Z. Morano over 3 years ago

    lol talk about taking it slow :)

  • avatar

    Horrorshow over 3 years ago

    LOL, funny stuff as always, Bryan! Poor tortoise! :-D

  • avatar

    Drew Martyn over 3 years ago

    very funny, nice one

  • avatar

    Bryan Thomas over 3 years ago

    Many thanks, Brandon, K.Z., Horrorshow and Drew. :o)

  • avatar

    Tony Spencer over 3 years ago

    oh yes, this one creeps up on you!

  • avatar

    Bryan Thomas over 3 years ago

    Cheers, Tony!

  • avatar

    Bryan Thomas about 3 years ago

    Cheers, Chloe. :o)

Join the conversation

Sign up or Sign in to leave a comment on this drabble.