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Alan traced his finger lovingly along Samantha's hairline. He followed the line of her nose, hesitating for a moment before continuing over her full lips. He then ran his finger over her left cheek with his delicate, surgeon's touch. He was precise, almost mechanical, until his actions gave way to a shiver, sexual in its nature, which ran throughout the length of his body as he recalled the deed with vivid clarity.

He returned the pillow that he had smothered Samantha with to the cupboard. It sat alongside another four pillows. Soon, Alan would add another pillow to his collection.

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    Drew Martyn over 3 years ago

    Superbly written and wonderfully grisly.

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    Tony Spencer over 3 years ago

    Just enough detachment to make this piece deliciously diabolical.

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    Brandon Sutton over 3 years ago

    The actions and feelings of Alan seem so intimate, it is a horrific surprise to hear at the end what is actually going on. Nice drabble!

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    Bryan Thomas over 3 years ago

    Many thanks, Drew, Tony and Brandon. :o)

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    Horrorshow over 3 years ago

    I think this is my favourite of all your drabbles so far, Bryan.

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    Bryan Thomas over 3 years ago

    Thanks!

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