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"Testicular cancer," he said. "Inoperable."
Suddenly, everything in my world was out of focus. I turned around without saying anything to him and walked out of the room. I made my way along the corridor and stopped just before the exit. There was nobody about so I lit a cigarette and kicked my shoe repeatedly against the silver waste bin.
'Inoperable'. The word ricocheted around inside my head.
"Tough shit, Henry, everybody's got to go sometime," I said to my daughter's tortoise as I dropped him into the bin at the vets and headed towards the pet shop in town.

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    Frenchie about 10 years ago

    Oh! that twisted :- )

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    Peter Muscutt about 10 years ago

    I don't believe I've read a story before featuring tortoises with cancer. But I have now! Great work, sir!

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    Ricky Moore about 10 years ago

    Haha :@zombiekiller

    I don't believe I've read a story before featuring tortoises with cancer.

    The way you put that was hilarious for some reason. I loved that twist too, good one!

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    Stuart Lugg about 10 years ago

    I can still hear the clang on the bottom of the bin - very good!

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    Stuart Lugg about 10 years ago

    Have now Drabbled a sequel - hope you don't mind!

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    Bryan Thomas about 10 years ago

    'Have now Drabbled a sequel - hope you don't mind!'

    Not at all!

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    Bryan Thomas about 10 years ago

    Thanks for the comments, folks!

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    Pearl (Bea) about 10 years ago

    Good one!

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    Bryan Thomas about 10 years ago

    Thanks, Bea.

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