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Charlie and Jack


The Hollow is dark, the Hollow is damp, the Hollow is scary and now on what had been a bright, warm summer day, the Hollow had become cold. Dark, damp, scary, cold and lost. Not the kind of day the boys were expecting.
"I think we're lost Jack."
"How can we be lost when we don't know where we're going?"
"Let's just keep walking," Charlie said, "It's not like the forest can go on forever."
But the forest did go on forever and the boys walked on and on never stopping and no one ever saw them again. The End.

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    A very, very bleak fairy tale. Loved it. :-)

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    Rodindeadpan about 5 years ago

    Thank you kind sir.

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    K.Z. Morano about 5 years ago

    i like the mysteriousness and the fairy tale feel to this story.

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    Brandon Sutton about 5 years ago

    Nice twist on the classic fairy tale ending. Good job!

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    Bryan Thomas about 5 years ago

    I'm gonna miss Charlie and Jack. Go on, resurrect 'em!

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