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With brutality! He grasped at it! His fingers trembled! His eyes watered! His mouth twisted into an evil grimace! And it slipped right through his grasp yet again!

He swore a curse. Grumbling his displeasure. Blinking several times to get the tears out of his eyes. He thought maybe I need a shot of whiskey!

No! This's a simple task. Didn't even need a straight razor for this!

He grasped at it again. His eyes filling with tears despite himself.

Finally he plucked the hair from his nose free! He inspected it with scorn, then tossed it in the rubbish!

2 comments add one below

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    D.M. over 8 years ago

    The short sentences work well!

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    T. Willemann over 8 years ago

    Eye-wateringly good!!

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