strange serenity disharmonious weightless utterly empty outside world continues yet she feels infinitely detached doesnt feel the Sun above the Earth below
she sits on the curb beside the white teddy bear strange how the flowers she had brought multiply do other people add their condolences
after a time drying her tears she returns to the house empty house family & friends told her to move out she cant attached to the house the house connected like an umbilical cord
each night hearing the cries the noises her daughter her husband finding their way lost wandering she waits for them
Brandon Sutton almost 10 years ago
I agree, it is a beautiful piece. Probably my favorite out the ones you've written, and there have been some amazing ones.
Rodindeadpan over 9 years ago
Nice enough to read three times. I'll read it again later.
Rodindeadpan over 9 years ago
I've read it again and it's even better this time.