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Ocean of Miracles

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Oceans of love, warmth in the darkest depths and peace on the surface. That's what the young man dreamt of. The new island seemes fairly wide. He walked through the forrest and suddenly! A corpse of a human being was right in front of him. The corpse was on an iron chair, in its hand, you can see a silver spear.
" This is not an ordinary island, May the gods show me the way!"
" You have been heard. Your wish will become a truth "
The sailor, shocked by the Strong deep voice; turned his back away !

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    Christopher almost 5 years ago

    I don't blame him! Nice one, Che.

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    Che bk201 almost 5 years ago

    thank you! Yeah I don't blame him either haha He will probably be forced to go back to the graveyard. Some interesting events are going to happen! stay stuned

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    Christopher almost 5 years ago

    Will do!

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    Jamie Clapperton over 4 years ago

    Neither do I blame the sailor,having been lulled by his dream at the beginning of the drabble .Am now wondering if turning back will even be possible for him. Whether or not it continues, enjoyed this. :-)

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    Che bk201 over 4 years ago

    hey Jamie ! i have been busy for months, work and trying to pursuit my studies consumed me in soul and mind ! i'm returning soon , thank you for you
    comment !

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