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a mass of people travelling around the globe searching for a treasure.
People loved each other , hated each other , killed, made children ,cheated , left the mass and went on isolation.
Isolation is a human's best friend when it comes to understanding life.
But, Technology made isolation a sickness that should have never been there for you when you're stressed, in pain or just reminiscing .
looking at the mass that keeps going in one path, You feel like you've fooled yourself thinking outside the box.
Yet, you don't kill, you hate less, you love and you die.

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    Christopher 5 months ago

    Wow, really good, Che.

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    Christopher 5 months ago

    I see you aren't following @nevillehunt nor @jehode. They're both regular contributors and very supportive. I suggest you follow them. They often give positive feedback.

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    Che bk201 3 months ago

    Thank you so much ! i will follow them both , I am sorry for replying too late , i've had rough months

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    Christopher 3 months ago

    No problem. I've had three surgeries over the last nine months and have been dealing with repercussions from that, so I understand.

    Hope things get better for you.

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    Che bk201 3 months ago

    oh I hope you're better now. Wish you all the best. And thank you for your kindness

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