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Knock knock whos there #1

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She was a bright young woman. She was pretty. But she was ‘from the wrong side of the tracks’.

She knew poverty. She knew hardship. But she knew how to survive.

She knew the boy liked her. She saw his potential. She would exploit her own.

The wrong side of the tracks... wrong, because often there lurks a bunch of ‘wrong-uns’. Wrong-uns who might prove useful if the right opportunity knocks. And Donna planned to make sure that opportunity would knock with a rat-tat-tat that couldn’t be ignored. Poor Tony would soon be knocked for six.

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    Neville Hunt about 2 years ago

    Trying to kickstart a little story. I have no idea where it will go, or if it will go at all. We will see.

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    Christopher about 2 years ago

    I'm already hooked!

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    Neville Hunt about 2 years ago

    Thanks Christopher!

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    Christopher about 2 years ago

    By the way, Neville, there's a drabbler named Alec Dekker that's been posting some lately. I don't think you're following him. You might want to check him out.

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    Neville Hunt about 2 years ago

    Thanks Christopher, I’ll check him out. From my side, I have discovered new Drablr Linda Hibbin, who’s really quite a laugh!

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    Christopher about 2 years ago

    Cool. I'll check them out.

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    Brian Mackinney about 2 years ago

    The bright young woman’s in charge. Tony will go far.

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    Brian Mackinney about 2 years ago

    Thank you Neville and Christopher for keeping the Drablr community alive. Your inspiration keeps me going.

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    Christopher about 2 years ago

    Thanks, Brian. I think we feel even more of a responsibility since Drew has flaked out on us. But you've become a vital part as well.

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