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Love Story #12

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“Huh! Is that all it is John? Really? Just how insecure are you? I flirt with the barman. So what... we all do! It’s just a game... and a game you’re not meant to be a spectator at! It’s a girls’ night out... ‘girls’... got it?... not a peeping tom’s titivation!” She hoped that would be enough to get her off the hook, and she added. “If you flirt with him he overfills your glass, gives you a little bit extra, that’s all.” Sorted!

Not sorted!

“And what extras does he give you in the ladies toilet?”

She immediately flushed.

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    Drew Martyn 3 months ago

    Neville, you can't stop it there!!!!!
    Oh ok then, you can, but it's nailbiting stuff. I can feel her stress, his sadness; I'm impressed by her ability to keep on the attack and by his coolness. It's building up superbly Neville and I hope there's a reasonable explanation and they're both happy again, but...
    So, so tense, I'm loving it :)

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    Neville Hunt 3 months ago

    Well Drew, maybe I trying to wean myself off the happy ending and see what it’s like on the dark side...🧟‍♂️

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    Neville Hunt 3 months ago

    More later today, but I need the light to do some DIY, but when it gets dark then maybe that might help my journey to the dark side...

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    Drew Martyn 3 months ago

    I don't think you need any help, not the way this is unravelling... :)

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