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Fedeltà #268

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Maybe the age gap made the difference, but unlike her sister, Marcia had taken it slowly with Paolo. It had been no energetic exercise class of bounce-ups, but rather a slow, measured approach to satisfaction, making it impossible for Paolo to forget. He was mesmerised by her beautiful breasts hanging tantalisingly close to his chest and her freshly showered smell. Marcia had been different to Sofia and the difference was amazing.

When she left Paolo, shaken and certainly stirred, and closed his door, she was straight back to being a mum again. It was as if nothing had happened.

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    Steve McBrevity over 1 year ago

    Neville - i hope you’re not sharing this stuff with your family or going for any interviews shortly! Keep it up Paolo!

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Steve - the family are grown ups, although they might get a shock at what sort of stuff goes through my mind! A couple of guys at my writers group are loving it though...both blokes of course! Btw...have you watched Witless yet (BBC iPlayer)? Some of the ideas for this have been prompted by it (It's very amusing, very well cast and acted and has a lovely ending)

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    Steve McBrevity over 1 year ago

    Yes I think witless is brilliant - great idea and the two girls are fabulous foils. Trouble is I watched the whole series in one go through the night and I’ve forgotten the ending. Remind me.

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    SPOILER ALERT! The ditsy blonde tracks down Patrick (who’s in witpro himself) in Kavos, disappears and 3 months later sends pic to Rhona on Xmas Day of her and Patrick, touching, meaningfully her tummy (I.e. she is preggers). I also love Willie Whelan... fabulous bit of casting!

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    Steve McBrevity over 1 year ago

    I’m obviously well behind. Will need to catch up when back in uk 🇬🇧

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    When are you back? Must meet for a bevvy!🍻

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