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"Mommy, it's for you!"

She hated it before she even had a chance to glance her daughter's way. Rebecca knew what her mind would do to the painting...

Warp it.

Distort it.

It would, a sick mind, make an innocent into a demon.

"Honey...?"

"Yes?"

"Go get DADDY."

"...Okay."

The girl scurried upstairs, retrieving a box of bottles and lids marked "BIG DADDY LONGLEGS". On her way downstairs, she scooped up a bottle of water and a pillow for when Mommy went to bed.

The demon spider whispered to her Mother,

"Pull the trigger."

Rebecca never stood a chance.

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    Horrorshow over 9 years ago

    Powerful writing. Very well done, Olivia. Something very frightening about this.

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    Bryan Thomas over 9 years ago

    Fab!

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    Christopher Angel over 9 years ago

    I really enjoyed this. You've packed so much into so few, very dark words.

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    K.Z. Morano over 9 years ago

    very disturbing. well done.

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