She lay there with her ebony hair and skin so fair. She was surrounded by the Seven, caught between heaven and the other place, when, a sound was heard just then.
'Twas the Charming Prince come to free her from Step Mother's sins!
But wait, something was amiss.
She slept on, even after his kiss, (which had weakened countless knees). This nagged at his peace.
"Maybe Snow White is..."
The thought set him ill at ease.
So his fear to dispel, he sent for Rapunzel.
But alas! his fear she did not quell.
For Rapunzel did break Snow White's spell!
Chris Walker almost 5 years ago
Ha ha :)
Horrorshow almost 5 years ago
Loved the line about the, "weakened countless knees"! :-D
Julie almost 5 years ago
Bryan Thomas almost 5 years ago
Haha! Great drabble!
Elizabeth O. Smith almost 5 years ago
Loved it ^^
op ruoho over 4 years ago
That was pretty awesome!
Horrorshow over 4 years ago
It has been weeks since you posted a drabble, Mildred. When will we again be treated to more of your excellent writing? :-)
Mildred Achoch over 4 years ago
Thank you all for your comments! Two new drabbles posted :-)