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LaQwanda's winged police interceptor streaked skyward effortlessly amidst pillowy clouds piercing through Earth's exosphere into the darkness of space like a sharp needle through a thin fabric in pursuit of her quarry. She was chasing a notorious criminal, wanted in several star systems.

Both ships dipped, twirled, skipped, dove and rose in a deft display of aerial acrobatics belying the tenacious resolve of the two pilots. Her target was good, but LaQwanda was better.

A few death-defying maneuvers later, and grateful for the weightlessness of space, she locked on and fired her disabler. Her quarry was ready for retrieval.

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    Neville Hunt over 5 years ago

    Wow, Michael, this is so exciting. I felt I was right there in LaQwanda, and getting pretty airsick! Terrific!

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    Jamie Clapperton over 5 years ago

    LaQuanda's good! I felt it too , Michael, Exhilarating read. :-)

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    Michael D. Brooks over 5 years ago

    Thanks. I'm still learning to say a lot with a little and make it impactful.

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    Neville Hunt over 5 years ago

    You're a quick learner then, Michael! Great stuff!

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