I couldn’t believe I’d been so careless. She stood there her face frozen in a rictus of perfect horror as she saw the mess I’d created. I hadn’t meant to of course, I’d been a little too enthusiastic in my investigations.
What can I say? When I start on a puzzle I’ll do whatever it takes to solve it. And this really was a tricky conundrum.
“My God, what have you done?”
“Looking for what you saw.”
“What do you mean?”
“You said she had the most beautiful soul, but I looked everywhere in her and I couldn’t find it.”
Bryan Thomas over 9 years ago
Nice one, Michael.
Pearl (Bea) over 9 years ago
Oh, my...
Kathy over 9 years ago
Everything that pulls me in! Prime insanity! lol!
Helen Laycock over 9 years ago
A great twist! Love it!