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I couldn’t believe I’d been so careless. She stood there her face frozen in a rictus of perfect horror as she saw the mess I’d created. I hadn’t meant to of course, I’d been a little too enthusiastic in my investigations.

What can I say? When I start on a puzzle I’ll do whatever it takes to solve it. And this really was a tricky conundrum.

“My God, what have you done?”

“Looking for what you saw.”

“What do you mean?”

“You said she had the most beautiful soul, but I looked everywhere in her and I couldn’t find it.”

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    Bryan Thomas almost 5 years ago

    Nice one, Michael.

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    Pearl (Bea) over 4 years ago

    Oh, my...

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    Kathy over 4 years ago

    Everything that pulls me in! Prime insanity! lol!

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    Helen Laycock over 4 years ago

    A great twist! Love it!

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    Steve Williams about 2 years ago

    Oh my god! Nice story Micheal!

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