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"You have the devil's smile." That's what she told me; before we kissed unseen under the bloated moon. I remember the air was chill. Wisps of our breath escaped into the air as we parted our kiss. "That was a devil's kiss." She teased, with an expression so coy.
"What is it?" She exclaimed, a hint of panic trembled in her voice. She had seen the glint of steel in the moon's cold light. "You have the devil's eyes!" She cursed as I plunged the knife deep.
"I have the devil's smile." I whispered alone and slipped into the night.

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    Rufus Glyn over 10 years ago

    Wooo dartk..... vLoed it though

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    Bryan Thomas over 10 years ago

    Devilishly good.

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    Michael Brookes over 10 years ago


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    Gabriela over 10 years ago

    you took too seriously your devil's smile.... :)

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    Kimberly about 10 years ago

    She knew before she knew.......so like the devil.

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    S J Gunn over 7 years ago

    What a wicked plot! :-)

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