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Dorian Dalton, an experienced astronaut, will become the first person on mars as soon as the spacecraft doors open. He can't wait to make his own history on the red planet. The doors open and the ramp lowers. Slowly, one leg at a time , he walks off the ship. He begins exploring the planet. Suddenly something small, sharp and fast hits his suit, damaging his suit and helmet. Gasping for air, the others rush out to try to help him but they had rushed out too late to try to save him. He becomes first to die on Mars.

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    Steve Williams over 3 years ago

    That was pure irony! I like your style. Welcome to Drablr.

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