He wanted them to feel him. Wanted them to see him.
He touched his mother's and his father's hand.
He whispered, "I'm still here, I'm STILL HERE!"
His mother and father looked at their little boy, lying there in the coffin... stone cold.
He begged them to see him. He still needed them.
~x~
"Do you think... he's in a better place...?" his mother asked years later. The two elders sat there, watching the fire crackle.
"I don't know..."
He looked at them... still there...hidden forever.
But he would not leave them. He would always need his momma and papa.
Neville Hunt over 4 years ago
More from the darker side Aishling. Just up Drew’s strasse!
Neville Hunt over 4 years ago
I too like the scene change ~x~. A worthy sacrifice of a word and more wordcount-effective than the alternative.