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Honestly, I didn't know how to feel. But I had to choose, so I chose him. I said yes.

Mom wasn't happy. Thought I was too young. That I should finish school. My friends said I was crazy, throwing my life away.

But love doesn't submit to logic.

Still, I was nervous.

Dreaming of our future, I feared the possibilities. Hoped that I had made the right decision. Was it too late to change my mind?

Finally the big day came.

As the doctor laid his tiny body on my chest, every doubt melted away. All I felt was love.

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    Mike Arnzen almost 10 years ago

    A MASTERFUL STORY! Great twist.

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    Horrorshow almost 10 years ago

    Welcome to drablr.com, Laura.

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    K.Z. Morano almost 10 years ago

    a beautiful story of a brave character.

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    Bryan Thomas almost 10 years ago

    Nice drabble.

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    Chris Walker almost 10 years ago

    Good one.

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    Mike Arnzen almost 10 years ago

    Coolness -- this story received "Drabble of the Week" on the site blog! Kudos, Laura!!!

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    Horrorshow almost 10 years ago

    Drabble of the Week! Very well done, Laura! Looking forward to reading more of your drabbles.

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    Patricia Lillie over 9 years ago

    Well done!

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    Tony Spencer over 9 years ago

    Excellent drabble. I think we want more....

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    Rodindeadpan over 9 years ago

    I demand you write more drabbles! Please.

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