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It was that moment when our eyes met, in the midst the crowd.
The flow of time moved slower, like gears clicking into place.
My hand reached for yours, and you did the same.

It was that moment when our fingers touched, I felt an electrifying jolt.
Your eyes on mine, time stilled and we felt whole.

It was that moment when we let go, a cold emptiness replaced your touch.
Our eyes lingered on each other, as the crowd pulled us away.

It was that moment when we lost what we found.
A moment that would never come back.

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    Frenchie over 4 years ago

    I like the nostalgia in it, the intensity of that moment. Well done :-)

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    Jade Falca over 4 years ago

    Thank you~ ^^ :3

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    So intense :) Loving your drabbles Jade!

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