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Heat #56

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"Lord, hear- "
Doug could pray forever. Jesus, once he started on a subject there was no stopping him. This prayer could last half an hour. His eyes burned white hot in his red and glowing face as they stared up into the furnace of the sky.
"-our prayer and accept-"
Doug held the stone high as if it was a trophy, his fist proudly pumping the air.
"-our sacrifice-"
Archie tried to get up.
Doug's elbow crashed into the side of Archie's head whose blood pumped thick and red even before he'd hit the ground.

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    Neville Hunt 3 months ago

    I know who’s side I’m on... and it ain’t Doug’s or the narrator’s. I want Archie to get out of this alive and I couldn’t give a monkeys about the other two!

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    Drew Martyn 2 months ago

    *shakes head sadly*

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