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Girl who helped me pick up shopping dropped on tube yesterday, thanx, contact me?
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Man on tube gave me apple for helping pickup stuff- I ate it! Delicious. Call? XXXXXXXX

For Sale
Collections horror novels, DVDs (extreme, R, snuff)
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Wanted
Working chainsaw. Top price paid.
Send: POBox 27884

For Sale
I ticket Cats.
Romantic novels.
1 Wedding Dress (unused)
Selection ladies clothes (size 10), shoes (8).
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Wanted
Small boxes, wood/other quickly decomposable material.
Send: POBox 278006

Wanted
Quicklime. Buyer collect.
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Girl who helped me pickup shopping at Tescos, thank you. Message me?
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10 comments add one below

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    Jim M over 4 years ago

    Brilliant, original, daring, successful. I'm a massive fan of this!

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    Hey thank you Jim, I really appreciate that :) When I had the idea for it this morning I didnt think I would get it to work, but I'm pleased with the way it turned out. Thanks again for the amazing comment Jim, love it!

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    Hey thank you Jim, I really appreciate that :) When I had the idea for it this morning I didnt think I would get it to work, but I'm pleased with the way it turned out. Thanks again for the amazing comment Jim, love it!

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    Jonathan Royan over 4 years ago

    Really liked this drabble. Each ad was a smaller tail in itself. You imagine all these moments actually happening as you read through. Well done. :-)

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    Thank you for the lovely comment Jonathan, cheers! :)

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    Kate Gowers over 4 years ago

    Really liked that - had to read it twice!

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    Neil Murton over 4 years ago

    Nice! I love drabbles that get a bit experimental with the format.

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    Thanks for the positive comments folks :)

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    Horrorshow over 4 years ago

    Seriously clever and well constructed piece of work. I don't think I could ever write something this intricate! Very well played, Drew. Score another vote from me.

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    Thanks Horrorshow, but don't under-rate yourself, your drabbles are superb and your writing top-notch and evocative. I regard you as one of the best writers on this site, and the writing on Drablr is of such a consistently high standard I think that's saying a lot :) Thank you for the very kind words, though, gratefully received.

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