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Hey
>>Hey, sup?
Nothing. Just felt like talking.
>>You ok?
Yeh. You?
>>Yeh.

>>You there?
Yeh.
>>Thought you’d gone offline.
Nah. Still here.
>>What you up to?
Nothing. You?
>>Nothing.

You there? I need to talk.
>>whassup dude?
I want to talk to you.
>>what about?
Fuckin nothing.
>>????
Like, anything. I mean I wanted to talk to you.
>>About what? You in trouble?
No. Just wanted to talk to you.
>>Oh right I get it. Thats cool. I’d like to talk to you.
Yeh? Thats really cool.
>>Awesome.:
My mums calling me for something now.
>>ok
Seeya soon?
>>

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    Tony Spencer almost 5 years ago

    Yeah, sums up all of my messages. Insightful and revealing Drabble. There's no pathos or pizzazz in the air tonight or any night, just ... pathetic.

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    Michael D. Brooks almost 5 years ago

    Nice. Sometimes a lot can be said when nothing is said at all.

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    Drew Martyn almost 5 years ago

    Thanks for the comments guys, glad you enjoyed it. :)

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    Jim M almost 5 years ago

    Ha ha! A brilliant tribute to the destruction of conversation. Love it love it love it

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    Horrorshow almost 5 years ago

    I don't think there are many writers here who could have pulled this off as well as you, Drew.

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    Drew Martyn almost 5 years ago

    Lovely comment Horrorshow, thank you so much. Now I need to get a bigger hat ;) lol

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