Freezing mist, kindled orange by the rising sun, rolls in waves over the river, and a silk covering of frost glitters on the rough grass.
Claggy mud sticks to my boots, making walking slow, tiresome.
The saltmarsh is pockmarked with ancient oyster pools, half-filled with murky, brackish water.
I follow a narrow track until I reach a vast mudflat, strewn with pebbles and luminescent oyster shells, and crisscrossed with lines of shimmering water like seared mackerel skin.
I open the urn, and let you slip through my fingers. The biting sea-breeze whistles up the creek, carrying you away.
Jamie Clapperton over 2 years ago
Beautifully done. Have read it a few times now.
VerityAlways over 2 years ago
Love the imagery!
Alec Dekker over 2 years ago
Well, how kind! Thanks so much for the feedback.
Sarah Oakes over 2 years ago
This is brilliant. You really paint the scene love your description makes it really vivid and visual as if we could be there too. A great piece, and with that urn, has a really emotive sense to it too.
Alec Dekker over 2 years ago
Thank you, Sarah - much appreciated!