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Freezing mist, kindled orange by the rising sun, rolls in waves over the river, and a silk covering of frost glitters on the rough grass.

Claggy mud sticks to my boots, making walking slow, tiresome.

The saltmarsh is pockmarked with ancient oyster pools, half-filled with murky, brackish water.

I follow a narrow track until I reach a vast mudflat, strewn with pebbles and luminescent oyster shells, and crisscrossed with lines of shimmering water like seared mackerel skin.

I open the urn, and let you slip through my fingers. The biting sea-breeze whistles up the creek, carrying you away.

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    Jamie Clapperton over 2 years ago

    Beautifully done. Have read it a few times now.

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    VerityAlways over 2 years ago

    Love the imagery!

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    Alec Dekker over 2 years ago

    Well, how kind! Thanks so much for the feedback.

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    Sarah Oakes over 2 years ago

    This is brilliant. You really paint the scene love your description makes it really vivid and visual as if we could be there too. A great piece, and with that urn, has a really emotive sense to it too.

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    Alec Dekker over 2 years ago

    Thank you, Sarah - much appreciated!

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