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“You bitch!” He tries to kick me.

I’m young and agile and easily evade him.

He flings the spade down, stomps away.

I peer into the hole, at the dead thing at the bottom. I recognise this one. She used to wave at me when she whizzed by on her bike.

He returns, looking happier. He spades earth into the hole. I silently watch.

I’m not like the rest of them, the dead creatures in the holes. I’m his favourite girl, his Kat. I will get my saucer of cream tonight, curl up beside him on the bed and purr.

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    Richard Charles Davidson almost 9 years ago

    Give me shivers. I think this is one of the scariest pieces I've read, if I am interpreting it correctly...

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    Michael D. Brooks almost 9 years ago

    I read this a few times before I realized the guy is a psychopath. Thumbs up.

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    Julie almost 9 years ago

    Cheers for the comments, guys.

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    D.M. almost 9 years ago

    Good one! Using point of view this way always surprises me.

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    Julie almost 9 years ago

    Thanks, D.M.

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