They flowed nebulously into the foyer, buffeted by the rain.
Stairs stretched out ahead, beckoning. Early - they sat in silence; gaze refusing to meet, eyes slid off of each other like snowflakes hitting a radiator.
Ushered in they took their seats. The show began.
Stars stretched out in infinite grace; breath-taking and beautiful. The music swelled, mercurial and purposeful. Wonders swirled, a visceral balletic crescendo. The audience, except the couple, applauded.
Rising from their chairs; tenuous and vague, twin wisps of smoke. Conciliatory, hands clasped; momentarily tightening, then falling loose.
The space that she left could never be filled.
Jim M over 8 years ago
Pensive, dark, melancholy... I love it, really well written mate
Alex Munro over 8 years ago
Thanks Jim!
Alex Munro over 8 years ago
Much appreciated !
Christopher over 8 years ago
Excellent debut. Such exquisite imagery. Welcome to Drablr, Mr. Munro.
D.M. about 8 years ago
Yes, a belated welcome. 'Looking forward to more!