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Occasionally he caresses my cheek, or tolerates me kissing his gloved hand. Mostly though, he doesn’t know I’m there. And rightfully so.

I brush his uniforms and polish his boots. It’s an honour and a privilege. I love him; we all do. But I the most. I’ll scratch your eyes out if you doubt me!

The happiest moment of my subservient life came when he ordered me to bathe him. I could barely contain my enthusiasm! An hour of measureless ecstasy in the Master’s tub! I wanked off relentlessly for days afterwards. My pathetically limp little penis is still sore.

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    Drew Martyn about 3 years ago

    Love it, the end made me laugh out loud, ooh painful!!

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Haha! Thanks, Drew; great to get your response. :-)

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    Rodindeadpan about 3 years ago

    Ordinary is just ordinary...push our limits. See what we can take. Love it by the way.

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    @Rodindeadpan - thank you my friend. I know how busy your life is at the moment but I hope we get treated to more of your wonderful writing soon.

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    @Chloe - define "ordinary" for me. I think I have written some "ordinary" drabbles amongst my collection and, although I'm probably not the best judge, I think that there is a certain degree of diversity in the pieces I post here. Perhaps I could challenge you to write something less inward-looking. For a change. I have a feeling that you'd do it brilliantly.

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    I don't _think_ I'm holding back but who's to say. I'm sorry that my writing doesn't quite satisfy you, Chloe. I sincerely appreciate your feedback.

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    Richard Charles Davidson about 3 years ago

    i think chloe was being sarcastic. :)

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Hmmm. Getting a ominous sense of déjà vu here. I went through this a couple of months ago on another site that I post drabbles on. A girl calling herself “Nina” criticised my writing as being too bland, too banal, too ordinary. When I told her that I was sorry that she didn’t like my writing, she deleted her account.

    :-(

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    op ruoho about 3 years ago

    Well I liked this a lot. Life is often (absurdly) ordinary. Nothing beats it. I find the writings that make me the most uncomfortable are truest to nature and our fucked up complications of it... if that makes any sense. You're very good at making me uncomfortable with your writing and that forces me to look inward.

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    So pleased that you liked the drabble, OPR. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I'm especially pleased that my writing can on occasion make you feel uncomfortable! That is very high praise indeed. :-)

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    That's an enormous compliment! I'm delighted by your very generous comments. Thank you so much. :-)

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    Horrorshow about 2 years ago

    I'm still lurking around, LMC. Thank you for being so very kind to me x

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