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After the removal of Denise’s womb, a thing made a nest inside her cavity. When Denise slept, the thing would painstakingly drag itself out of her vagina, pulling itself free with long, spindly, claw tipped limbs, before venturing into the night to feed.

In her dreams, Denise could see through the thing’s searching, manifold eyes. It hunted down rats and cats, cruelly slicing and rending them as they screamed, before it devoured what little corpus of them remained.

Before dawn, the thing would return to its nest. Denise would go to work that day feeling rested and satisfied.

And whole.

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    Frenchie about 3 years ago

    wow, disturbing but I love it. I love the ending too very much..

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Thanks for reading and commenting, Frenchie. Glad you liked it. :-)

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    Drew Martyn about 3 years ago

    Wonderfully freaky, great drabble mate!

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Cheers, Drew! Thanks for the positive feedback. :-)

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Mission accomplished then! Thanks for reading and commenting, Chloe. :-)

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Haha! Thank you, Chloe! :-P

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    Rodindeadpan about 3 years ago

    You are becoming a Master of Horror. Good work.

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Sincere thanks Samantha and Rodindeadpan for your lovely comments, much appreciated. :-)

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    Dan Martin about 3 years ago

    That was a creepy, yet strangely entertaining read. I like the dark, skin-crawling tone of your writing.

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Why thank you, Dan; great to hear your thoughts. :-)

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    Richard Charles Davidson about 3 years ago

    Oh, hark! Here is a new Horrorshow drabble! Excellent as always! Amazing work! Way to uphold your end of the bargain constantly and consistently!

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    I'm very flattered by your high praise, Richard; thank you so much! :-)

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    K.Z. Morano about 3 years ago

    gahhh that was so gross and so good. great drabble!

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    Horrorshow about 3 years ago

    Thank you, K.Z. Always a great sign if I can gross you out! ;-)

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    Neil Murton almost 3 years ago

    That was awesome. Top and tail are just perfect.

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    Horrorshow almost 3 years ago

    Cheers, Neil! Glad you enjoyed the drabble. :-)

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    Bryan Thomas almost 3 years ago

    As a man, or something similar, that totally creeped me out, dude.

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    Horrorshow almost 3 years ago

    I'm delighted to have made you feel that way, Bryan! Thanks as always for reading and commenting. :-)

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    Horrorshow almost 3 years ago

    Thank you to all who read and voted for, "A Living Together" to make it Drabble of the Week #34!

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