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“Stop naggin’ woman. I said I’d get it done.”
“When? You said that two weeks ago.”
“Then wait two weeks and a day. Ain’t gonna make no difference.”
“Damn you man. You said you’d fix everything, and you ain’t done anythin’.”
“Nag, nag. That’s all you do. Get out of my way.”

She stepped back from his truck, clouds of dust still floating from his tire tracks.
He walked towards the shed. She followed.
He shot her husband twice.

“When I said I’ll get it done, it means I’ll get it done.”

The hired killer took his money and left.

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    Drew Martyn about 3 years ago

    Superb... again! I should have commented on all your drabbles, Mona, but I just had to get on and read the next one, and they've never failed to enthrall! Welcome to Drablr, and thanks for sharing some superb drabbles.

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    Mona about 3 years ago

    hi Drew... Thank you so much for your comment... Very encouraging!

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    Peter Henderson about 3 years ago

    Owww that last line....great stuff...many thanks

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