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The Tales Series

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In my dream, I was walking with my beloved along the grassy banks of the river.
The dream changed. He was waving goodbye, his boat gliding away. I ran but I couldn't catch up. I fell into the murky waters, weeping so much, I became a lotus flower.
My beloved returned, a raven haired beauty by his side. Demanding, she pointed to me. Unknowingly, he scooped me from the waters. As he held me, he felt a great sadness. Angry, his lover threw me overboard.
My beloved cried in anguish and jumped.
The boat vanished. Only two white lotuses remained...

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    Brandon Sutton over 9 years ago

    Great drabble with a unique means of conveying the emotional parts of the story.

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    Elizabeth O. Smith over 9 years ago

    Loved this and all your drabbles really :)

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    Bryan Thomas over 9 years ago

    Great stuff, Francine!

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    Horrorshow over 9 years ago

    Well written, Frenchie.

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    Frenchie over 9 years ago

    Thank you everyone, I really appreciate the appreciation :)

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    K.Z. Morano over 9 years ago

    very surreal. wonderfully done.

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