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The voices in my head have decided to have a tea party. They really don't care about me, they talk as if I'm not there. What they say is not always very pleasant. One is saying I'm a total waste of space, another is declaiming an endless list of my bad traits, and so on. I'm forced to endure their bitchiness for hours.
A little voice rises to my defence. Immediately, the others join forces.
'kill it, kill it.'' And they do. They are merciless. I scream to make them stop.
I forgot I was on the bus. People stare..

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    Brandon Sutton almost 10 years ago

    I haven't had voices in my head, but I can certainly understand this feeling. Very good drabble!

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    Elizabeth O. Smith almost 10 years ago

    Nice! Love the way the voices are so uncivilized/barbaric compared to the setting of a tea party.

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    Geraldine Messin almost 10 years ago

    Nice one.

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    Horrorshow almost 10 years ago

    "The voices in my head have decided to have a tea party."

    Absolutely love this concept! :-)

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    Bryan Thomas almost 10 years ago

    Very good, Francine.

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    Ken Magee over 9 years ago

    That's a disturbing drabble... I'm suitably disturbed.

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    Jonathan Mills over 9 years ago

    I like the little touch of humour at the end.

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