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When they first got together, he couldn't get enough of her. Always telling her he missed her. Then, he started to disappear. At first, a few hours, then a night here and there, then a few days. He would always come back though, tell her loved her, soothing her tears, have sex and be gone again. She would wait and wait, just for a little bit of him.
One day, she wasn't there. Only few words left.
'No more waiting game. Enjoy your life.'
He broke down and cried. Too late! Never take for granted those who love you most.

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    Horrorshow almost 10 years ago

    "Never take for granted those who love you most." Wise words!

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    Andrew Lawston almost 10 years ago

    Great to see you're still drabbling! How are you?!

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    Frenchie almost 10 years ago

    Thank you both. @ Andrew, I am fine, gone back to poetry but still love drabbling... :)

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    Brandon Sutton almost 10 years ago

    This seems kind of like a parable in some respects. And with a very important lesson at the end. Great job!

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    Bryan Thomas almost 10 years ago

    Ditto to what Brandon said.

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